Roll Me Over in a Clover
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Post by Roll Me Over in a Clover on Dec 7, 2008 17:18:42 GMT -5
Hey there. Im one of those authors from Kochiers site (Aburbity) and the WG place. Havent written an urban sonnet in a while so ill just jump right in for it. Intimate City The concrete smooth skin; a wonder to touch, Her eyes and lips glitter in the darkness, My fingers nimble and reach for a brush, As she sleeps soundly i writhe in distress. A grand opening of the citys doors, The room is packed with cameras and light, And record as i may the rope and saw, Still ready and hard to stand for a fight. Her transparent yet subtle eyes are gla**, For my tower is ready to befriend, Her eyes and mine meet and are soon to pa**, As my messenger gives a formed consent. And we moved as we wished, two neighboured towns Despite the countries and bystanders frowns. Meh been a while but whatever
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SkyHighThong
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Dang, i've been hopping like this for years and I still can't get out of my box!
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Post by SkyHighThong on Dec 7, 2008 21:40:49 GMT -5
It was pretty good, for not doing it for a while, nice you stayed on topic during the poem and you keep a good sceme going. Good job.
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